Saturday, December 1, 2012

Words, words, words...

No, not having an Eliza Doolittle moment.  But I do have a question for any who care to comment:

In writing something for a church to sing today, is "verdant" too old fashioned?

I think it's a better fit for the current draft, but if it's a turn-off for congregations, then maybe I need to get over myself and rephrase it.

No, you can't see it in context, yet :)

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