No, not having an Eliza Doolittle moment. But I do have a question for any who care to comment:
In writing something for a church to sing today, is "verdant" too old fashioned?
I think it's a better fit for the current draft, but if it's a turn-off for congregations, then maybe I need to get over myself and rephrase it.
No, you can't see it in context, yet :)